New Article Review Please

Hey @arthur.tkachenko

I hope you are doing great. Please review my story:
https://app.hackernoon.com/drafts/Tiz5t25Eu3fstpr8td7m

Thank you so much.

Best,
Ray Jonathan

Hey @arthur.tkachenko

Please review my article: I have edited it.
https://app.hackernoon.com/drafts/ysgVcqLnCkHqvSh5yB3g